I was eventually moved from Schleich farm to a much larger stable in Hobart , Tasmania
When I moved back into Schleich farm I was 5 years old. I was put in Prince’s paddock and I observed how much stronger and mature he looked. I could see that he missed me (much to my relief) and still loved me.
Many horses mocked Tinker that even after I had been away from Prince for 3 years and told by Prince to never see him again. I still live with Prince and would rather be with Prince then share a paddock with Tinker. He has never forgiven me or Prince for all the insults he has endured many years ago.”
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My apologieys for taking so long, and for it being so short (:
Good job! Great end!
Hey, I'm the first 'outsider' to comment!
Check your emails, Lauren!
Cassie xoxoxo
Your writing style is conversational and engrossing. From this passage I can see that you have talent. Good work :)
that's ok, lauren! it was really good! could you possibly tell me how far you are into the story? like what chapter your up to and how many there are in the story etc.???
by the way me and izi are going to be online at three and on buzz! did you want to come over and see if we all can chat???
thanks!
~Bri
Hi Lauren,
Great Story. Touching. You're very talented.
Ooh, and you know how 'Mariella,' commented. Well, she came onto my blog the other day. She said that she is a writer (17) and is going to be writing a book about ballet. However, she doesn't dance, so she wanted to sort of 'interview,' me and ask me questions regarding dance, so that she could get inside the ballerina's head, and know that is is like to be a dancer.
I feel SOOOOO privileged to be asked! I'll tell you more in an e-mail, later. When I have some time.
Izi :)
How come you are suddenly having to 'approve' of comments now?
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