Sunday, May 22, 2011

End results

Jack noticed Prince on the wrong side of the fence and quickly came to put a halter over his head and return him to his right paddock.
          I followed Prince back to our home slowly (as I was trying to take in all that I had witnessed).  
          Mother softly nickered towards me and then nibbled my withers using her leathery lips. It was times like that where I knew that I had the best Sire and Dam in the world.
          Sophie, looking very sulky, stayed at the corner of our paddock.
          Jack took the halter of Prince and fixed the fence, much to me and Sophie’s disappointment.
          Prince walked up to Sophie.
          “Sophie,” he said softly but stern.
          “Sophie look at me when I’m talking to you” he said more sternly.
          Sophie looked, but with a lot of anger in her eyes. Prince whinnied (just as humans would laugh) and ruffled her short mane. Sophie nickered, and cheekily nipped Prince’s neck. Jack (who was watching the scene) chuckled to himself, and got back to work.

7 comments:

Izi said...

Sweet as post. Hey, I meant to tell you this due to the last post, but I love the names you have chosen for your story. Did you know that Sophie is on of my favourite names? Well, actually Sophia, but it's pretty similar.

Have a good week.

Izi :)

Lauren said...

I'm glad you like the name. I really don't know how I chose names. I guess I thought of names that would suit the characters. I wanted an unusal name for the main character, so I choose the name Jilla.

Izi said...

Yeah, Jilla's really nice too, I forgot to mention that. Have you read the 'Rowan Of Rin,' books? In those books, the main character's Mother's name is Jilla. And my Grandma's name is Jill. Pretty cool, hey?

You're going a GREAT job.

Izi :)

Bri said...

AWESOME!!!!!

Bri said...

P.S. I made it to 20!!! Ya!

Lauren said...

YAY Bri!

Thats so exciting! You really deserve it! Your blog is so awesome!

Izi said...

I made it to 26!!! YAY :)

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