Wednesday, July 13, 2011

Mother's Story End...

I was eventually moved from Schleich farm to a much larger stable in Hobart, Tasmania’s capital city, where I could take part in more events and events on the mainland. I lived there for 3 years.
           When I moved back into Schleich farm I was 5 years old. I was put in Prince’s paddock and I observed how much stronger and mature he looked. I could see that he missed me (much to my relief) and still loved me.
           Many horses mocked Tinker that even after I had been away from Prince for 3 years and told by Prince to never see him again. I still live with Prince and would rather be with Prince then share a paddock with Tinker. He has never forgiven me or Prince for all the insults he has endured many years ago.”

7 comments:

Lauren said...

My apologieys for taking so long, and for it being so short (:

Anonymous said...

Good job! Great end!
Hey, I'm the first 'outsider' to comment!
Check your emails, Lauren!

Cassie xoxoxo

Mariella Cecilia Catherine-Rose Hunt said...

Your writing style is conversational and engrossing. From this passage I can see that you have talent. Good work :)

Bri said...

that's ok, lauren! it was really good! could you possibly tell me how far you are into the story? like what chapter your up to and how many there are in the story etc.???

by the way me and izi are going to be online at three and on buzz! did you want to come over and see if we all can chat???

thanks!

~Bri

Izi said...

Hi Lauren,

Great Story. Touching. You're very talented.
Ooh, and you know how 'Mariella,' commented. Well, she came onto my blog the other day. She said that she is a writer (17) and is going to be writing a book about ballet. However, she doesn't dance, so she wanted to sort of 'interview,' me and ask me questions regarding dance, so that she could get inside the ballerina's head, and know that is is like to be a dancer.

I feel SOOOOO privileged to be asked! I'll tell you more in an e-mail, later. When I have some time.

Izi :)

Izi said...

How come you are suddenly having to 'approve' of comments now?

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